tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post1215921326209112416..comments2023-12-05T05:05:57.475-05:00Comments on Wordplay, Swordplay: Experimenting with PitchUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post-49021430945978697602009-05-15T09:18:00.000-04:002009-05-15T09:18:00.000-04:00Thank you! A door-opener is a good way to look at ...Thank you! A door-opener is a good way to look at them.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08616276555920544920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post-69309103409119397862009-05-15T08:20:00.000-04:002009-05-15T08:20:00.000-04:00Pitches are interludes. I'm thinking. Just a way t...Pitches are interludes. I'm thinking. Just a way to open the door to what your follow up shebang is, but yes it's got to be good. And yours sounds totally awesome!jdsanchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04658357606303732115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post-17838813498343498452009-05-14T08:05:00.000-04:002009-05-14T08:05:00.000-04:00Litgirl01 , I don't know about me having guts, but...Litgirl01 , I don't know about me having guts, but thanks! <br /><br />Danyelle, thanks! That's very helpful!<br /><br />Angela, amen!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08616276555920544920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post-85026962396164308252009-05-12T18:52:00.000-04:002009-05-12T18:52:00.000-04:00Pitches are so hard. If you try to squeeze too muc...Pitches are so hard. If you try to squeeze too much into them, the storyline seems too complicated and the impact is lost. But, if you don't allude to certain layering in the plot, the pitch seems too watered down and linear to be interesting.Angela Ackermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01808259088625142389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post-417706636845880402009-05-11T21:21:00.000-04:002009-05-11T21:21:00.000-04:00Practice makes perfect. :D This is hard stuff to d...Practice makes perfect. :D This is hard stuff to do. Something that's been a big help to me is this: http://edittorrent.blogspot.com/2009/04/log-line-pitches-or-how-to-tweet-your.html<br /><br />It looks a lot easier than it is. I'm also very grateful to all the wonderful people that help fine tune these things. Other people's perspectives can be a big help.Danyelle L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10366276085080565870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5350801126596899090.post-91198486470070107472009-05-11T20:15:00.000-04:002009-05-11T20:15:00.000-04:00It looks good to me, but I'm not sure about all th...It looks good to me, but I'm not sure about all that myself. I don't have the guts for that yet! So, kudos for having guts! ;-)Tracihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16399764927137200395noreply@blogger.com